This picture shows six people buying two boys and some girls that, I think they are buying some clothes. Provably the were luquing for burgains.They are so happy and I think they would keep buying. The girl that is in the middle is problavly taking to another friend to come because they are having a great time.This mall remember my that is similar of Alcala Magna that is a mall that we have in our town.
This picture shows a group of people going to shops looking for new clothes. They are six people in this group. Four of them are girls and the rest are boys. I think that is the birthday of the girl wearing the black jacket and pink dress. The rest of the people have presents to give her at dinner. The boys might planned a surprise party and they are doing it today. This place is huge because it have many shops and it has two floors.
D.P 6B: In this picture I can see a group of teenagers having fun in the shopping mall, I think they have bought clothes reduced because there are low prices. If I was them I would be looking for more bargains. Actually I don’t like shopping very much but I like buying, it’s very wierd. Continuing with the photo they look soo happy and glad for what they bought.
good job! just remember we learnt some cool words on shopping… like bargains or sales… if you buy reduced clothes means they are tiny…like doll clothes and I don’t think you meant that , did you? 😛 keep up the good work!
CT, 6B: In this picture I can see six boys and girls in a mall. The girl who is wearing a pink dress is talking with her telephone instead of talk with her friends, she is also giving her hand with her boyfriend’s hand I think.
The boy who is at the right is wearing gray trousers, and a orange bag .They might be in the shopping centre because of the store that is at the right.They probably be in summer because of the clothes, the shoes..
I think they are happy however the boy who is behind the girl that is wearing a yellow and black T-shirt I don’t think so…
6ºB NSD In this picture I can see many people walking between them. Theya look really cheerful and it looks that they are having fun.. Personally, it is summer because they are wearing short clothes. It seems that they are in an enormous mall because there are two floors, as I can see and with many shops on both sides. This people have been shoppin during a long time because they have meny bags on their hands. In the top of the picture, I can seethe second floor with some places where people can sit down to eat. In the right, I can see a shop that sells hand, body and foot cream. Next to it, I think it is a flower shop. On the left, I can see a plant which is next to a picture, it seems head’s people to give announcements about a new shop probably. In the middle of the photo I can see the people, probably, they are having an informal meeting becuse of the clothes they are wearing. I can’t see many people around, unless they are inside the shops. I think, they will stay more time because they don’ look with much stress to go home. I not, the will probably go to somewhere else to have a snack probably.
Well done again!!! Really good job… let me help you improve a few things… we don’t really say… stay more time rather stay longer…, they don’t look with much stress to go home sounds a bit awkward.. I would say.. they don’t seem to be willing to go home yet… I not (not sure what do you mean by that…) they will probably go somewhere (without to)… I think it is a flower shop… you probably mean there is a flower shop… … just some minor mistakes… good job, maybe next time .. take your time to review a little the small details.. I am sure it will come out much better!!! thanks
JDH-6ºA: In this photo I can see some people walking inside a shopping mall. In my opinion, they are close friends. They seem to be very happy, so they have probably done some nice shopping. I think they are on summer because of how they are dressed. Actually, they might be there because of summer sales. Also, on the right corner there are some bird cages, so I think it is a pet shop. If I was with them, I would stop in that shop because I love animals. In fact, my aunt has a bird and yesterday I went to her house and helped her clean the bird cage.
6ºB-CC: this picture shows teenagers having fun in a mall centre. it might be a huge mall bacause in the background i can see a second floor in the left side there are some shops.it can be summer bacause they are all wearing summer clothes . the girl with the pink dress is talking with someone on the telephone .their friends are happy , but when that happens to me i hate it . my mother is always with the telefone and when we go shopping with her and she takes the telefone i feel bad. well i this picture they are all happy so thats my oppinion. i like going shopping but i have never tried with friends.
AA-6ºA: In this picture I can see somo teenagers having fun in a shopping mall. In the left side there are few shops. In the middle of the picture I can see a girl having a telephone conversation, I suppose she is speaking to a friend because she is smiling and I like having telephone conversations with my friends. They maybe are looking for bargains. I like going shopping to help my mum to look for bargains. It might be summer because they are wearing
t-shirts and dresses. They are happy and enjoying the moment, I think being with your friends is one of the best things.
Excellent job AA…. what a wonderful long sentence!!!!! the third one… I SO MUCH love that you have used the new vocabulary (bargains…) and again really cool that you express your opinion….on the scene.
BSG In this picture I see four teenagers in very big mall. I think is sprinter, because the two grils and the boy has long jeans and the other gril has a jacket. They has some clothes bags in their hands. The gril of the pinck drees is calling whit her cousin (friend, mum, dad,..)And the other friends is talking between them and laught too…If iI were in the big mall Iwould be very scared because I’m afraid of being kidnappe by some older man.
Be careful with the verb tenses… They HAVE, the two girls and the boy HAVE /WEAR… .. The other friends ARE… however an impressive second conditional!!!… Thank you so much for your comment, keep working and I am sure you will improve so fast….
In these picture I see four teenagers in a big mall. I supose is summer because they are wearing cold clothes and they have some bags in their hands.The girl with flip flops or sandals is having a call and is laughing a lot, she is just having fun.The rest is talking between them and enjoying too…If I were there I would have fun but I am too young to go with friends and without supervision.I remember my cousin that was almost going to be stolen by an old man, that’s the reason why I am scared now about going alone in a street or mall.
Wonderful job! The rest are talking (because it is plural) … what a wonderful sentence you have written… I am so happy for your effort.. just remember when we speak about people we say who… I remember my cousin who … I love it that you make it personal…
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This picture shows six people buying two boys and some girls that, I think they are buying some clothes. Provably the were luquing for burgains.They are so happy and I think they would keep buying. The girl that is in the middle is problavly taking to another friend to come because they are having a great time.This mall remember my that is similar of Alcala Magna that is a mall that we have in our town.
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This picture shows a group of people going to shops looking for new clothes. They are six people in this group. Four of them are girls and the rest are boys. I think that is the birthday of the girl wearing the black jacket and pink dress. The rest of the people have presents to give her at dinner. The boys might planned a surprise party and they are doing it today. This place is huge because it have many shops and it has two floors.
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D.P 6B: In this picture I can see a group of teenagers having fun in the shopping mall, I think they have bought clothes reduced because there are low prices. If I was them I would be looking for more bargains. Actually I don’t like shopping very much but I like buying, it’s very wierd. Continuing with the photo they look soo happy and glad for what they bought.
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good job! just remember we learnt some cool words on shopping… like bargains or sales… if you buy reduced clothes means they are tiny…like doll clothes and I don’t think you meant that , did you? 😛 keep up the good work!
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CT, 6B: In this picture I can see six boys and girls in a mall. The girl who is wearing a pink dress is talking with her telephone instead of talk with her friends, she is also giving her hand with her boyfriend’s hand I think.
The boy who is at the right is wearing gray trousers, and a orange bag .They might be in the shopping centre because of the store that is at the right.They probably be in summer because of the clothes, the shoes..
I think they are happy however the boy who is behind the girl that is wearing a yellow and black T-shirt I don’t think so…
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6ºB NSD In this picture I can see many people walking between them. Theya look really cheerful and it looks that they are having fun.. Personally, it is summer because they are wearing short clothes. It seems that they are in an enormous mall because there are two floors, as I can see and with many shops on both sides. This people have been shoppin during a long time because they have meny bags on their hands. In the top of the picture, I can seethe second floor with some places where people can sit down to eat. In the right, I can see a shop that sells hand, body and foot cream. Next to it, I think it is a flower shop. On the left, I can see a plant which is next to a picture, it seems head’s people to give announcements about a new shop probably. In the middle of the photo I can see the people, probably, they are having an informal meeting becuse of the clothes they are wearing. I can’t see many people around, unless they are inside the shops. I think, they will stay more time because they don’ look with much stress to go home. I not, the will probably go to somewhere else to have a snack probably.
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Well done again!!! Really good job… let me help you improve a few things… we don’t really say… stay more time rather stay longer…, they don’t look with much stress to go home sounds a bit awkward.. I would say.. they don’t seem to be willing to go home yet… I not (not sure what do you mean by that…) they will probably go somewhere (without to)… I think it is a flower shop… you probably mean there is a flower shop… … just some minor mistakes… good job, maybe next time .. take your time to review a little the small details.. I am sure it will come out much better!!! thanks
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JDH-6ºA: In this photo I can see some people walking inside a shopping mall. In my opinion, they are close friends. They seem to be very happy, so they have probably done some nice shopping. I think they are on summer because of how they are dressed. Actually, they might be there because of summer sales. Also, on the right corner there are some bird cages, so I think it is a pet shop. If I was with them, I would stop in that shop because I love animals. In fact, my aunt has a bird and yesterday I went to her house and helped her clean the bird cage.
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WOnderful comment JDH… I love how you predict and read the situations.. Plus your English is top top… Well done! Keep up the good work!
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6ºB-CC: this picture shows teenagers having fun in a mall centre. it might be a huge mall bacause in the background i can see a second floor in the left side there are some shops.it can be summer bacause they are all wearing summer clothes . the girl with the pink dress is talking with someone on the telephone .their friends are happy , but when that happens to me i hate it . my mother is always with the telefone and when we go shopping with her and she takes the telefone i feel bad. well i this picture they are all happy so thats my oppinion. i like going shopping but i have never tried with friends.
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Great job CC! Thank you… just be careful with your typing… since you must use capital letters!!
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AA-6ºA: In this picture I can see somo teenagers having fun in a shopping mall. In the left side there are few shops. In the middle of the picture I can see a girl having a telephone conversation, I suppose she is speaking to a friend because she is smiling and I like having telephone conversations with my friends. They maybe are looking for bargains. I like going shopping to help my mum to look for bargains. It might be summer because they are wearing
t-shirts and dresses. They are happy and enjoying the moment, I think being with your friends is one of the best things.
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Excellent job AA…. what a wonderful long sentence!!!!! the third one… I SO MUCH love that you have used the new vocabulary (bargains…) and again really cool that you express your opinion….on the scene.
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BSG In this picture I see four teenagers in very big mall. I think is sprinter, because the two grils and the boy has long jeans and the other gril has a jacket. They has some clothes bags in their hands. The gril of the pinck drees is calling whit her cousin (friend, mum, dad,..)And the other friends is talking between them and laught too…If iI were in the big mall Iwould be very scared because I’m afraid of being kidnappe by some older man.
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Be careful with the verb tenses… They HAVE, the two girls and the boy HAVE /WEAR… .. The other friends ARE… however an impressive second conditional!!!… Thank you so much for your comment, keep working and I am sure you will improve so fast….
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In these picture I see four teenagers in a big mall. I supose is summer because they are wearing cold clothes and they have some bags in their hands.The girl with flip flops or sandals is having a call and is laughing a lot, she is just having fun.The rest is talking between them and enjoying too…If I were there I would have fun but I am too young to go with friends and without supervision.I remember my cousin that was almost going to be stolen by an old man, that’s the reason why I am scared now about going alone in a street or mall.
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Wonderful job! The rest are talking (because it is plural) … what a wonderful sentence you have written… I am so happy for your effort.. just remember when we speak about people we say who… I remember my cousin who … I love it that you make it personal…
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